NICE

It does'nt seem like I have anything else to praise.
Original, gorgeous, and humorous.
The story was imaginative and unexpected.
I don't know how to say this, this is beautiful.

Its ok.

i can see you've put in many effort trying to come up with a few funny situations, and
too be honest, its not bad. The background and the music was great too.
One thing, however, bugs me. Master Chief does not look like Master Chief.
also when u look at him sideways, he looks more like a pig. lol.

Nice angles.

I like the POVs

Special.

Not trying to flatter you, but the idea is very special.
The music was good for the first 2 second, it fits well, but it would be alot better if the music wasnt looping.
Like what they said, maybe u can expand on it, make more ppl, more ways to die and stuff.
p.s. i like the room design.

Great.

The piano sounds great.
(i may sound simplistic, but thats because i dont know how to express my feelings toward this piece with any word i can think of )